The Architect of Sleep by Steven Boyett

OK, I had to post about this book after I that last book I discussed – because it got me thinking, sometimes I just get a kick out of a really crazy story. Speaking of rather out there books that I liked.. The Architect of Sleep by Steven Boyett is possibly the most out there book I've read in the past few years. I picked this up for 25 cents or something in a thrift store in Sedona last Christmas. It's out of print and Amazon doesn't have an official picture but if you click on the link to the amazon page there is a customer picture. Its somewhat …well I don't know if its a giant cat with an earring or what.. but it was cheap and I recognized the author's name because I'd read online that his book Ariel is worth reading (still have to find that book).

This is the general setup: Jim Bentley goes about his business on a typical day - feeds his dog, makes plans to see a movie with his girlfriend, checks in with work at his nightjob at a 7-11, and then goes spelunking for the day. Then his life is turned upside down when he goes through some kind of weird portal in the cave. Everything looks different, species almost extinct on Earth are plentiful and he can't find a sign of his vehicle or anyone else. And then he meets a raccoon who is much larger than raccoons he knows, and who is much more intelligent – able to use sign language to communicate. Jim says "Need I say it? I was Charlton Heston. This was Planet of the Raccoons". Isn't that AWESOME?!! Hello? A raccoon race using sign language?!? And there's so much more like how the government works and .. OK I think my credibility is going.. Well when I explain it like that – its about a race of intellegent racoons in a world where apes never evolved into humans.. it sounds very kooky, but its more interesting and less laughable to read than it sounds. And most reviewers on Amazon gave it 5 stars, so I'm not deluded, I sweaarr.

The story was very well written – Jim's emotions are believeable and the pace in which he learns about the culture and assimilates the language and what has happened feels real. This is written from the first person objective of both Jim and Truck (the first raccoon he meets). A great deal of thought has gone into explaining the sign language of the raccoons and their verb/tenses, which I found to be fascinating. Their hierarchy and the tale of civil unrest and intrigue was fascinating as well. I would say that the detail in the world building here is very well done, maybe even too well done.. - this book is the first part of a planned series and because of a disagreement with the publisher, there were no more books published. I think the publisher told the author – too much detail, cut out a lot of world-building things and the author disagreed and then bought back his contract. He may be kicking his younger self now though I'm sure at the time he didn't feel like the publisher was right. This is from the author's website:

"A few years ago I reread Architect & Geography. Midway through the second book I found myself thinking, Will you get to the damned point? It was too slow. There was too much detail. Background and foreground had traded places. It was as if my notes for the novel were in the novel. In other words, folks, Ace Books was right on the money in many of their comments. Mea culpa, mea maxima culpa. "

Steven Boyett's website indicates that he is working on the sequel(s) and on publishing it/them. More on that here: http://www.steveboy.com/archetyp.html (I found the whole explanation of what happened fascinating because I'm nosy and want to know that kind of stuff).

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Falling Upwards by Kassandra Sims

I just finished reading this book, went online to google it and didn't find much that I agreed with so I'm going to review this one first.

First of all: Ug, why did they call this book "paranormal romance"? That makes it sound like its a romance novel in a paranormal setting. It really felt like a .. contemporary fantasy book to me with romantic elements. There was definite sexual content but it was really vague and mild, not really the type of thing you would find in a pure romance novel – it read like a fantasy novel.

The story starts out with our protagonist Neva on a business trip in Wales. Neva goes to a bar where she encounters a handsome young man who often has young women trying to get his attention. When this man tries to pry himself away from perhaps the 10th one, Neva feels compelled to step in and pretend to be his girlfriend. She doesn't do this because she's interested – she doesn't really know why she does this, only that she feels like a puppet when the words come out. This starts some weirdness in the air and something begins. There on Neva begins to lose track of reality. When she goes home to coastline Alabama she keeps having visions of falling through a pond into another world, weird dreams about a riotious wood, apple trees, and chimes. Her mother and friends are worried, and her sister is ready to commit her. Around Mardi Gras, Neva has begun to accept her madness and decides she knows where the pond she hallucinates about is – her grandparents farm. Neva immediately goes there and jumps in. Almost unsurprisingly she finds herself in another world – she meets fairies, a talking raven and stag, and March – the young Welsh man at the bar. They send her on a quest. March is surly and resigned, as if he has been here before, and has no reason to hope. Neva finds his attitude annoying but feels compelled to finish the quest and go home. Sniping at one another they trek through a wildly imagined land. Many fairytale and mythical elements make appearances (nothing I was expecting) and a reader has many "W..T..eff.." moments. Which I liked! I really enjoyed how unexpected the story was (especially the detailed landscapes), and the growing relationship between March and Neva. The character development, mostly that of Neva and her attitude to dealing with her situation just delighted me. I also liked that March and Neva use modern speech when they argue as it contrasts greatly with their surroundings. The only complaint .. I wish this story was longer! I would have felt more content with two more chapters and a better idea of what really happened in the gap before the final chapter, and yet it is not a bad ending at all. I just want more time with the story and characters. I wanted to turn the book over and open it to the first page to reread it as soon as I finished so I could understand more. Is there a sequel? Want one.

After I read the book, I went on Amazon and looked at a review by HK (you know who I mean). What was she smoking? Don't read her review, it's so wrong, especially this part: "As Neva begins to believe that there is more to the universe than the physical plane starting with the metaphysical feelings of falling in love, she struggles with reality vs. illusion as she enters a realm in which her only realism anchor is March. " What? starting with the metaphysical feelings of falling in love?!  March was the realism anchor? Ahhh? Many reviews seem to glomp onto the insanity/hallucination aspect. I think many people who didn't like the novel did not like the way the story shifts from one location and situation to another, but that is what I liked about the book – it works to convey that "Alice through the Looking Glass" feel. I also found the writing itself very savor-worthy. 8.5 or 9/10.

P.S. This came out April this year and is the author's second book. I'm going to have to look for her first book – "The Midnight Work". That got 2 stars on Amazon so far and I think the complaints are also about the story "jumping around" and I think they wanted paranormal romance with emphasis on romance so I'm not going to listen to them.

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